Stanley: 3..2..1..action...i said action..steve!

Steve: oh sorry anyways im going to destroy your towns and everything you know no one can do anything about it and no one can stop me!!!

Stanley: What about your mum?

Steve: shut up stanley!! Anyway yeah im gonna destroy your towns and everything you know no one can do anything about it and no one can stop me!!! Not even my mum...actually yeah my mum could. My name yes...my name is hmmmmm the critical eye.



CONOR: OMG I JUST GOT COLLATED!!!!

ALEX: CONOR JUST GO GET A LIFE MATE!!

CONOR: IF YOU DON’T LIKE IT GET OUT OF THE HAWKS NEST kaka kaka

ALEX: look conor I have been beaten up on my way to your ‘nest’

Conor: are you alright mate? We need to do something about this?

Treatment

1^st the beginning- in the start of our film Red tornado we established the two hero’s and why he is a villain for. In the opening the hero’s Conor and Alex are just regular people. They see the villain Steve on the news and are disgusted. The next day Alex was walking to Conors ‘The hawks nest’ as he is walking there he is beaten up by Steve then villain. He then walks to conor all bruised a bleeding walks into Conor’s room outraged and wanting revenge.

2^nd Middle – The Two hero’s plot there revenge with their new costumes which look like wannabe heroes. As they are plotting their revenge they are troubled about how to get Steve back but one day Conor was watching jimmy neutron followed by fairly odd parents and he suddenly comes up with a cunning plan to get Steve back to what he has done to Alex/ He runs to Alex’s to tell him the great news.

3^rd End –The two heroes now have their plan set out and their all geared up in costume to get Steve back. They set off and prank call Steve pretending to be Stanley his useless sidekick for another new feed to the area but they trap him in a parking lot on the top of Sainsbury’s. They start to chase Steve but soon catch up and are forced to fight, slaps are thrown left right and centre between the three of them until the mighty battle has ended because of Steve running of crying to his mum. In the end the infamous duo of red tornado prevails.



I think that our treatment is good because it is a simple explination of what happens throughtout our film in enough detail so if a person read it they would understand what the film is about and who and what the characters are about

This is our storyboard of pictures throughout this shows what will be happening throughotu the opening two minutes it firstly shows match on action with grabbing the door handle it then shows the title sequence red tornado. The next three shots are alex walking into our room we have now decided to add a scene before in which it flicks through me punching and working out to alex walking it looks to give dramatic start to the opening we then decide to lead off thirty seconds of opening. 

 We then will have a comedic moment it will then lead on to action moments with me and alex watching the news and finding about a new super evil man in town with knowone to help him and with the latest bad guy terrorising the nation it is left up to the new kids on the block to help them.